Wednesday, March 28, 2012

tribulation

One day I wake up find out that the sky is low and dark even with lighting shuttle around the cloud like the God' anger. Even though it looks very scary, I still went to school as usual. However everything works just fine until -- “ Aaaaaaa a a” my classroom fall into a big deep hole. Ground is shaking; sky is roaring. The hole's top was sealed by blocks of building, all the students lied in side the hole quiet and lifeless. Hours later each of us woke up, we climb out of the hole by a crack on the ground. However the image in our sight shocked us so much that no one made a noise. Then after a moment or a hour, someone started to cry, a switch seems to be turned on, madness just occurred our mind some were crying, some were shouting, me and the others were just staring there silently. Everything was gone! The school, the houses, and any other human buildings were disappeared, and the ground was full of cracks, dust, and cooled glass like stuff. The twenty-five of us were in complete chaos until the night was almost going to come. The students gathered in the forest discussing what to do next. we talked about what had happened to our world, and we came up the idea that it was god's tribulation because the forest and other nature were remained, so it must be a punishment for human kinds.Yet that was only the past, so we quickly move on to the next topic:how are we going to survive? First, everyone hiked around to see if there are any food. So, for the first week everyone did their best to survive, and because of the pressure from death and sadness twenty-five of us worked like one man that we didn't have any conflict, suggestion from anyone would approved by all of us if it sounds appropriate. In that kind of order we lived for weeks then things started to change.

1 comment:

  1. Patrick,this is very creative. I really like how you decided to start the paragraph from the beginning of the day.

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